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  1. Yes he wants me to write a memo explain the importance of attending meetings and attendance at work.
  2. It explains the problem with the facts and only facts and then makes recommendations based on the facts.
  3. Yes it shows that it is not a recurring action and is something that can be resolved.
  4. More or less it goes from the problem to facts to recommendations to future items to what I am to do about it.
  5. Yes the facts are laid out so I can understand the whole problem.
  6. Yes
  7. No
  8. Directly the point is sated in facts and then placed into a easy to understand form
  9. Yes the tell me what they want me to do.
  10. Specifics they tell me exactly what is going on and is expected and wanted.
  11. Yes
  12. Yes
  13. NO the sate the point once
  14. Yes there is no change in the tense of the memo
  15. No it goes from 3rd to first.
  16. Yes
  17. Yes
  18. Yes
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